Fix a path typo in building tutorial.

docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Building-Quickstart.md

@@ -15,13 +15,9 @@ An example would be
 
      create/drop box
 
-A _/switch_ is a special, optional flag to the command to make it behave differently. It is always
+A _/switch_ is a special, optional flag to the command to make it behave differently. It is always put directly after the command name, and begins with a forward slash (`/`). The _arguments_ are one or more inputs to the commands. It's common to use an equal sign (`=`) when assigning something to an object.
-put directly after the command name, and begins with a forward slash (`/`). The _arguments_ are one
-or more inputs to the commands. It's common to use an equal sign (`=`) when assigning something to
-an object.
 
-> Are you used to commands starting with @, like @create? That will work too. Evennia simply ignores
+> Are you used to commands starting with @, like @create? That will work too. Evennia simply ignores the preceeding @.
-> the preceeding @.
 
 ## Getting help
 
@@ -41,8 +37,7 @@ The most common comman is
 
 This will show you the description of the current location. `l` is an alias.
 
-When targeting objects in commands, you have two special labels you can use, `here` for the current
+When targeting objects in commands, you have two special labels you can use, `here` for the current room or `me`/`self` to point back to yourself. So
-room or `me`/`self` to point back to yourself. So
 
     look me
 
@@ -51,19 +46,13 @@ will give you your own description. `look here` is, in this case, the same as pl
 
 ## Stepping Down From Godhood
 
-If you just installed Evennia, your very first player account is called user #1, also known as the
+If you just installed Evennia, your very first player account is called user #1, also known as the _superuser_ or _god user_. This user is very powerful, so powerful that it will override many game restrictions (such as locks). This can be useful, but it also hides some functionality that you might want to test.
-_superuser_ or _god user_. This user is very powerful, so powerful that it will override many game
-restrictions (such as locks). This can be useful, but it also hides some functionality that you might
-want to test.
 
 To temporarily step down from your superuser position, you can use the `quell` command in-game:
 
     quell
 
-This will make you start using the permission of your current character's level instead of your
+This will make you start using the permission of your current character's level instead of your superuser level. If you didn't change any settings, your game Character should have an _Developer_ level permission - high as can be without bypassing locks like the superuser does. This will work fine for the examples on this page. Use
-superuser level. If you didn't change any settings, your game Character should have an _Developer_
-level permission - high as can be without bypassing locks like the superuser does. This will work
-fine for the examples on this page. Use
 
     unquell
 
@@ -71,30 +60,20 @@ to get superuser status again when you are done.
 
 ## Creating an Object
 
-Basic objects can be anything -- swords, flowers, and non-player characters. They are created using
+Basic objects can be anything -- swords, flowers, and non-player characters. They are created using the `create` command:
-the `create` command:
 
     create box
 
-This created a new 'box' (of the default object type) in your inventory. Use the command `inventory`
+This created a new 'box' (of the default object type) in your inventory. Use the command `inventory` (or `i`) to see it. Now, 'box' is a rather short name, let's rename it and tack on a few aliases.
-(or `i`) to see it. Now, 'box' is a rather short name, let's rename it and tack on a few aliases.
 
     name box = very large box;box;very;crate
 
 ```{warning} MUD clients and semi-colon: 
-Some traditional MUD clients use the semi-colon `;` to separate client inputs. If so,
+Some traditional MUD clients use the semi-colon `;` to separate client inputs. If so, the above line will give an error. You need to change your client to use another command-separator or to put it in 'verbatim' mode. If you still have trouble, use the Evennia web client instead.
-the above line will give an error. You need to change your client to use another command-separator
-or to put it in 'verbatim' mode. If you still have trouble, use the Evennia web client instead.
-
 ```
 
 
-We now renamed the box to _very large box_ (and this is what we will see when looking at it), but we
+We now renamed the box to _very large box_ (and this is what we will see when looking at it), but we will also recognize it by any of the other names we give - like _crate_ or simply _box_ as before. We could have given these aliases directly after the name in the `create` command. This is true for all creation commands - you can always tag on a list of `;`-separated aliases to the name of your new object. If you had wanted to not change the name itself, but to only add aliases, you could have used the `alias` command.
-will also recognize it by any of the other names we give - like _crate_ or simply _box_ as before.
-We could have given these aliases directly after the name in the `create` command. This is true for
-all creation commands - you can always tag on a list of `;`-separated aliases to the name of your
-new object. If you had wanted to not change the name itself, but to only add aliases, you could have
-used the `alias` command.
 
 We are currently carrying the box. Let's drop it (there is also a shortcut to create and drop in
 one go by using the `/drop` switch, for example `create/drop box`).
@@ -117,93 +96,66 @@ The description you get is not very exciting. Let's add some flavor.
 
     desc box = This is a large and very heavy box.
 
-If you try the `get` command, we will pick up the box. So far so good, but if we really want this to
+If you try the `get` command, we will pick up the box. So far so good, but if we really want this to be a large and heavy box, people should _not_ be able to run off with it that easily. To prevent this we need to lock it down. This is done by assigning a _Lock_  to it. Make sure the box was dropped in the room, then try this:
-be a large and heavy box, people should _not_ be able to run off with it that easily. To prevent
-this we need to lock it down. This is done by assigning a _Lock_  to it. Make sure the box was
-dropped in the room, then try this:
 
     lock box = get:false()
 
-Locks represent a rather [big topic](../../../Components/Locks.md), but for now that will do what we want. This will lock
+Locks represent a rather [big topic](../../../Components/Locks.md), but for now that will do what we want. This will lock the box so noone can lift it. The exception is superusers, they override all locks and will pick it
-the box so noone can lift it. The exception is superusers, they override all locks and will pick it
 up anyway. Make sure you are quelling your superuser powers and try to get the box now:
 
     > get box
     You can't get that.
 
-Think this default error message looks dull? The `get` command looks for an [Attribute](../../../Components/Attributes.md)
+Think this default error message looks dull? The `get` command looks for an [Attribute](../../../Components/Attributes.md) named `get_err_msg` for returning a nicer error messageod (this can be seen from the default `get` command code). You set attributes using the `set` command:
-named `get_err_msg` for returning a nicer error messageod (this can be seen from the default `get` command code). You set attributes using the `set` command:
 
     set box/get_err_msg = It's way too heavy for you to lift.
 
-Try to get it now and you should see a nicer error message echoed back to you. To see what this
+Try to get it now and you should see a nicer error message echoed back to you. To see what this message string is in the future, you can use 'examine.'
-message string is in the future, you can use 'examine.'
 
     examine box/get_err_msg
 
-Examine will return the value of attributes, including color codes. `examine here/desc` would return
+Examine will return the value of attributes, including color codes. `examine here/desc` would return the raw description of your current room (including color codes), so that you can copy-and-paste to set its description to something else.
-the raw description of your current room (including color codes), so that you can copy-and-paste to
-set its description to something else.
 
-You create new Commands (or modify existing ones) in Python outside the game. We will get to that
+You create new Commands (or modify existing ones) in Python outside the game. We will get to that later, in the [Commands tutorial](./Beginner-Tutorial-Adding-Commands.md).
-later, in the [Commands tutorial](./Beginner-Tutorial-Adding-Commands.md).
 
 ## Get a Personality
 
-[Scripts](../../../Components/Scripts.md) are powerful out-of-character objects useful for many "under the hood" things.
+[Scripts](../../../Components/Scripts.md) are powerful out-of-character objects useful for many "under the hood" things. One of their optional abilities is to do things on a timer. To try out a first script, let's put one on ourselves. There is an example script in `evennia/contrib/tutorials/bodyfunctions/bodyfunctions.py` that is called `BodyFunctions`. To add this to us we will use the `script` command:
-One of their optional abilities is to do things on a timer. To try out a first script, let's put one
-on ourselves. There is an example script in `evennia/contrib/tutorials/bodyfunctions/bodyfunctions.py`
-that is called `BodyFunctions`. To add this to us we will use the `script` command:
 
     script self = tutorials.bodyfunctions.BodyFunctions
 
-This string will tell Evennia to dig up the Python code at the place we indicate. It already knows
+This string will tell Evennia to dig up the Python code at the place we indicate. It already knows to look in the `contrib/` folder, so we don't have to give the full path.
-to look in the `contrib/` folder, so we don't have to give the full path.
 
-> Note also how we use `.` instead of `/` (or `\` on Windows). This is a so-called "Python path". In a Python-path,
+> Note also how we use `.` instead of `/` (or `\` on Windows). This is a so-called "Python path". In a Python-path, > you separate the parts of the path with `.` and skip the `.py` file-ending. Importantly, it also allows you to point to Python code _inside_ files, like the `BodyFunctions` class inside `bodyfunctions.py` (we'll get to classes later). These "Python-paths" are used extensively throughout Evennia.
-> you separate the parts of the path with `.` and skip the `.py` file-ending. Importantly, it also allows you to point to
-Python code _inside_ files, like the `BodyFunctions` class inside `bodyfunctions.py` (we'll get to classes later).
-These "Python-paths" are used extensively throughout Evennia.
 
 Wait a while and you will notice yourself starting making random observations ...
 
     script self
 
-This will show details about scripts on yourself (also `examine` works). You will see how long it is
+This will show details about scripts on yourself (also `examine` works). You will see how long it is until it "fires" next. Don't be alarmed if nothing happens when the countdown reaches zero - this particular script has a randomizer to determine if it will say something or not. So you will not see output every time it fires.
-until it "fires" next. Don't be alarmed if nothing happens when the countdown reaches zero - this
-particular script has a randomizer to determine if it will say something or not. So you will not see
-output every time it fires.
 
 When you are tired of your character's "insights", kill the script with
 
     script/stop self = tutorials.bodyfunctions.BodyFunctions
 
-You create your own scripts in Python, outside the game; the path you give to `script` is literally
+You create your own scripts in Python, outside the game; the path you give to `script` is literally the Python path to your script file. The [Scripts](../../../Components/Scripts.md) page explains more details.
-the Python path to your script file. The [Scripts](../../../Components/Scripts.md) page explains more details.
 
 ## Pushing Your Buttons
 
-If we get back to the box we made, there is only so much fun you can have with it at this point. It's
+If we get back to the box we made, there is only so much fun you can have with it at this point. It's just a dumb generic object. If you renamed it to `stone` and changed its description, noone would be the wiser. However, with the combined use of custom [Typeclasses](../../../Components/Typeclasses.md), [Scripts](../../../Components/Scripts.md)
-just a dumb generic object. If you renamed it to `stone` and changed its description, noone would be
-the wiser. However, with the combined use of custom [Typeclasses](../../../Components/Typeclasses.md), [Scripts](../../../Components/Scripts.md)
 and object-based [Commands](../../../Components/Commands.md), you could expand it and other items to be as unique, complex
 and interactive as you want.
 
-Let's take an example. So far we have only created objects that use the default object typeclass
+Let's take an example. So far we have only created objects that use the default object typeclass named simply `Object`. Let's create an object that is a little more interesting. Under
-named simply `Object`. Let's create an object that is a little more interesting. Under
+`evennia/contrib/tutorials` there is a module `red_button.py`.  It contains the enigmatic `RedButton` class.
-`evennia/contrib/tutorial_examples` there is a module `red_button.py`.  It contains the enigmatic
-`RedButton` class.
 
 Let's make us one of _those_!
 
     create/drop button:tutorials.red_button.RedButton
 
-The same way we did with the Script Earler, we specify a "Python-path" to the Python code we want Evennia
+The same way we did with the Script Earler, we specify a "Python-path" to the Python code we want Evennia to use for creating the object. There you go - one red button.
-to use for creating the object. There you go - one red button.
 
-The RedButton is an example object intended to show off a few of Evennia's features. You will find
+The RedButton is an example object intended to show off a few of Evennia's features. You will find that the [Typeclass](../../../Components/Typeclasses.md) and [Commands](../../../Components/Commands.md) controlling it are inside [evennia/contrib/tutorials/red_button](../../../api/evennia.contrib.tutorials.red_button.md)
-that the [Typeclass](../../../Components/Typeclasses.md) and [Commands](../../../Components/Commands.md) controlling it are
-inside [evennia/contrib/tutorials/red_button](../../../api/evennia.contrib.tutorials.red_button.md)
 
 If you wait for a while (make sure you dropped it!) the button will blink invitingly.
 
@@ -218,25 +170,17 @@ You know you want to.
 
 ## Making Yourself a House
 
-The main command for shaping the game world is `dig`. For example, if you are standing in Limbo, you
+The main command for shaping the game world is `dig`. For example, if you are standing in Limbo, you can dig a route to your new house location like this:
-can dig a route to your new house location like this:
 
     dig house = large red door;door;in,to the outside;out
 
-This will create a new room named 'house'. Spaces at the start/end of names and aliases are ignored
+This will create a new room named 'house'. Spaces at the start/end of names and aliases are ignored so you could put more air if you wanted.  This call will directly create an exit from your current location named 'large red door' and a corresponding exit named 'to the outside' in the house room leading back to Limbo. We also define a few aliases to those exits, so people don't have to write the full thing all the time.
-so you could put more air if you wanted.  This call will directly create an exit from your current
-location named 'large red door' and a corresponding exit named 'to the outside' in the house room
-leading back to Limbo. We also define a few aliases to those exits, so people don't have to write
-the full thing all the time.
 
-If you wanted to use normal compass directions (north, west, southwest etc), you could do that with
+If you wanted to use normal compass directions (north, west, southwest etc), you could do that with `dig` too. But Evennia also has a limited version of `dig` that helps for compass directions (and also up/down and in/out). It's called `tunnel`:
-`dig` too. But Evennia also has a limited version of `dig` that helps for compass directions (and
-also up/down and in/out). It's called `tunnel`:
 
     tunnel sw = cliff
 
-This will create a new room "cliff" with an exit "southwest" leading there and a path "northeast"
+This will create a new room "cliff" with an exit "southwest" leading there and a path "northeast" leading back from the cliff to your current location.
-leading back from the cliff to your current location.
 
 You can create new exits from where you are, using the `open` command:
 
@@ -244,8 +188,7 @@ You can create new exits from where you are, using the `open` command:
 
 This opens an exit `north` (with an alias `n`) to the previously created room `house`.
 
-If you have many rooms named `house` you will get a list of matches and have to select which one you
+If you have many rooms named `house` you will get a list of matches and have to select which one you want to link to.
-want to link to.
 
 Follow the north exit to your 'house' or `teleport` to it:
 
@@ -263,8 +206,7 @@ To manually open an exit back to Limbo (if you didn't do so with the `dig` comma
 
 ## Reshuffling the World
 
-You can find things using the `find` command. Assuming you are back at `Limbo`, let's teleport the
+You can find things using the `find` command. Assuming you are back at `Limbo`, let's teleport the _large box_ to our house.
-_large box_ to our house.
 
     teleport box = house
         very large box is leaving Limbo, heading for house.
@@ -276,27 +218,21 @@ We can still find the box by using find:
         One Match(#1-#8):
         very large box(#8) - src.objects.objects.Object
 
-Knowing the `#dbref` of the box (#8 in this example), you can grab the box and get it back here
+Knowing the `#dbref` of the box (#8 in this example), you can grab the box and get it back here without actually yourself going to `house` first:
-without actually yourself going to `house` first:
 
     teleport #8 = here
 
-As mentioned, `here` is an alias for 'your current location'. The box should now be back in Limbo with you.
+As mentioned, `here` is an alias for 'your current location'. The box should now be back in Limbo with you. We are getting tired of the box. Let's destroy it.
-
-We are getting tired of the box. Let's destroy it.
 
     destroy box
 
 It will ask you for confirmation. Once you give it, the box will be gone.
 
-You can destroy many objects in one go by giving a comma-separated list of objects (or a range
+You can destroy many objects in one go by giving a comma-separated list of objects (or a range of #dbrefs, if they are not in the same location) to the command.
-of #dbrefs, if they are not in the same location) to the command.
 
 ## Adding a Help Entry
 
-The Command-help is something you modify in Python code. We'll get to that when we get to how to
+The Command-help is something you modify in Python code. We'll get to that when we get to how to add Commands. But you can also add regular help entries, for example to explain something about the history of your game world:
-add Commands. But you can also add regular help entries, for example to explain something about
-the history of your game world:
 
     sethelp History = At the dawn of time ...
 
@@ -304,5 +240,4 @@ You will now find your new `History` entry in the `help` list and read your help
 
 ## Adding a World
 
-After this brief introduction to building and using in-game commands you may be ready to see a more fleshed-out
+After this brief introduction to building and using in-game commands you may be ready to see a more fleshed-out example. Evennia comes with a tutorial world for you to explore. We will try that out in the next lesson.
-example. Evennia comes with a tutorial world for you to explore. We will try that out in the next lesson.